sauntering vaguely downward ([info]aziraphale_666) wrote in [info]zelda_yaoi,
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Ficlet: Time

*waves shyly* Hullo! I just joined this comm a few days ago - stumbled upon it by accident, and am very happy that I did! I had no idea there were so many Zelda yaoi fans out there.

I myself am a huge Link/Sheik supporter, and with that in mind ... I come bearing an introductory ficlet. ^^;; Written in a very short amount of time and late at night, so be gentle. (I may regret posting this in the morning, but late-night enthusiasm has overcome me. XD)

Title: Time
Author: Chen ([info]aziraphale_666)
Rating: PG
Warnings: Angst, Link/Sheik, slight AU (Sheik being in possession of his own, decidedly male, identity)
Disclaimer: Yeah, right. Do I look like a Nintendo executive? I don’t think I’m even old enough to have created Link …
A/N: My first ever Link/Sheik ficlet. And written late at night to boot. Be nice. ConCrit is MUCH appreciated.

Summary: In their world, there are too many ‘never’s – and never enough time. 430 word one-shot.




He’s waiting for him outside the temple, like he knew he would be, and they don’t exchange any words – there are never any words. The Hero is wounded, badly, the white of his tunic and of his pale skin making the blood more vivid, his eyes more blue. It doesn’t matter. He crushes the smaller man to him, ignoring the screaming protest of his aching body, the call for rest, the faint desire to collapse into a senseless heap on the twilight-damp grass - because he needs this more.

There’s life trembling here against his dying resolution, the taste of the sheikah’s fear for him on his tongue, the cat-like strength flush against his collapsing limbs, the butterfly pulse racing beneath his destructive fingers. He leaves smears of blood – his and others’ – wherever he touches, but they’re both past noticing, past caring. One of them is dying, in need of the other’s strength; neither is sure which one is which. But they both know that they’re running out of time.

Sheik’s hands retain their firm grip on Link’s forearms, even after the rest of him pulls away, and they both try and pretend it’s not because the Hero will collapse if he lets him go. Navi hovers above them uncertainly, knowing that they’re letting precious seconds slip through their fingers – or so she thinks. They know the truth, though. They’re hoarding the time, not wasting it, clutching to it tightly, guarding it jealously, afraid to let it go.

Link is used to change; it’s the sum and compilation of everything he’s ever known. He embraces it, rides it, accepts it. But Sheik knows that things weren’t supposed to turn out this way. They were never meant to speak, to touch, to know. They both have jobs to do, and anything else is a deadly distraction that costs precious minutes, could cost precious lives.

Link takes a deep breath, steadying himself, gently pulling free of Sheik’s worried grasp. “Okay,” he rasps wearily, blinking a few times to regain focus. “Tell me what I need to do next.”

They don’t embrace again. They don’t say ‘I love you’. There are never any words. There is never enough time.

They never see each other again. Sheik dies in a dungeon cell far beneath the castle walls; Link returns to the childhood that was taken from him. The world’s in a hurry to return to normal, busy with restoring, healing, rebuilding. The obligatory happy ending.

No one stops to wonder if it’s what the Hero would have wanted.

After all, there isn’t any time.

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  • 26 comments

[info]ryutsuki

July 9 2006, 06:42:41 UTC 5 years ago

This beautiful! Really, really beautiful! Or it could just be because I'm drunk. But I trust it'll be this beautiful when I'm sober!

[info]aziraphale_666

July 9 2006, 16:09:38 UTC 5 years ago

*laughs* Hopefully it'll still stand up beneath the (sober) light of day. Thank you. ^_^

[info]ryutsuki

July 11 2006, 00:00:46 UTC 5 years ago

It's just as great sober as it is drunk XD

[info]arora_kayd

July 9 2006, 08:22:04 UTC 5 years ago

That was wonderful. The last part really it me. I don't know if I just wasn't expecting it, or it was just beautiful, or both.

Thanks very much for sharing!

[info]aziraphale_666

July 9 2006, 16:10:40 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you ^.^ I appreciate you taking the time to read/review!

[info]diety_of_sorrow

July 9 2006, 10:13:53 UTC 5 years ago

That was ... very sad. Very. You have a gift - keep writing!

[info]aziraphale_666

July 9 2006, 16:11:12 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks :)

[info]yubberducky

July 9 2006, 22:05:59 UTC 5 years ago

I'm not much of a Link/Sheik fan, but this was quite gorgeous. The last line was especially powerful. But then again, the question of what Link might really want is always on my mind and usually in my fanfiction, so it's always nice to see someone else asking the same question. :)

[info]aziraphale_666

July 10 2006, 00:50:54 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you so much ^_^

The 'return to childhood' at the end of OOT always bothered me ... it seemed too abrupt; does he retain his memories when he goes back? If so, wouldn't it be harder to live the life of a child with all that on his shoulders? And if he doesn't remember, is it worth to lose all that he gained in his life? His opinion on the matter doesn't seem to have anything to do with it - as it never does. Poor Link XD I'm glad to see that someone else wonders the same thing, too. ^_^

[info]yaoi_queen

July 13 2006, 07:56:39 UTC 5 years ago

That was great. I just joined this community and your fic was the first I read. ^^ Ever since Ocarina of Time, my sis and I have been big Sheik/Link supporters. I've always found it rather comical (and ironic) that he always seemed to want Sheik more when he thought she was a guy. XD His sweet smiles and the fact that he always wanted to get close to him was priceless. ^_^ Also, he seemed rather disappointed when Zelda revealed herself to be Sheik. X3

Anyhoo, this fic was well done. I liked the angst behind Link's feelings surrounding Sheik's death. I think Link's returning to his childhood form was him trying to escape the pain of losing the one he loved. If he doesn't remember him, there will be no lingering pain. Sad, but true. -_- I dunno if that's what you were trying to convey. I was just giving my opinion. ^^; Keep writing. You have skills.

[info]aziraphale_666

July 13 2006, 23:14:38 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! I think that's the nicest review I've recieved. ^_^

I agree; Link did seem disappointed to discover that Sheik didn't actually exist. And he was always very glad to see him - his one true friend, his one constant ali, no matter how mysterious or guarded his motives.

Thanks for taking the time to read and review! (and by the way, I love your icon ^^)

[info]yaoi_queen

July 13 2006, 23:26:08 UTC 5 years ago

*blush* Really? You're welcome. My pleasure. ^^

*nods* Yes; and I also loved the official music they used everytime Sheik came to help Link. ^_^ It was the most romantic and sweet music. *melts* I felt like setting out a nice candlit dinner for them everytime it played. X3

Thanks! ^^ Do you like FF7 and/or Advent Children? It's awesome, ne? ^_~ Are there pairings from it you like?

[info]aziraphale_666

July 13 2006, 23:36:49 UTC 5 years ago

Aww, I know what you mean - that music is gorgeous. And hehe, the SO deserved a candle-lit dinner! LoL, I can just see them sitting there, all awkward like, trying to make small talk XD

I love Advent Children! :D A friend and I are going to a convention this summer as Reno and Kadaj. I'm a Reno/Rude fan, though I'm still fairly new to the AC fandom in general, so I'll read just about everything ^_^ You?

[info]yaoi_queen

July 14 2006, 00:01:00 UTC 5 years ago

=^__^= I know! I can imagine them blushing and trying to avoid eye contact cuz they're so nervous. <333 Too perfect!

REALLY? Awesome! At AX, I saw a couple of awesome AC cosplayers. Took piccies of them all, of course. ^_~ Which convention are you going to?

I like Reno/Rude, too. It's a cute pairing. ^^ I've got quite a few faves from AC, but a few are: Sephiroth/Cloud (Cloud's his little bitch ^_~), Sephiroth/Vincent (smexiness), Vincent/Cloud, Reno/Cloud, Zack/Cloud, Sephiroth/Cloud/Zack... I know there are others, but I'd have to watch it again. ^^;;; I'm not a big fan of Cloud; I just like pairing him up with guys. XDDD

[info]aziraphale_666

July 14 2006, 00:20:19 UTC 5 years ago

Aww, that would be so cute. Do you ever write fan fiction? Because we should so write that. ^_^

Reno/Rude is just too cute not to love, as far as I'm concerned :D I like Vincent/Cloud too - so much angst to go around! XD - and Cloud/Zack, because Cloud has totally got Zack issues. ^.~

We're going to Otakon in Baltimore, early August. ^_^

[info]diety_of_sorrow

July 14 2006, 01:23:40 UTC 5 years ago

Omg. *curses* One day, I shall go to a convention. ONE DAY. *dies*

Heh. Vincent/Cloud would have to be my favourite pairing. XD The angst is almost physically manifesting. And now ... *re-dies*

[info]yaoi_queen

5 years ago

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[info]yaoi_queen

July 14 2006, 23:14:41 UTC 5 years ago

^_^ Oh yea, I write fanfiction. It's a semi-passion of mine. So, you're saying we should team up and co-author it? Sounds like fun. ^___^

*nods* Cloud has MANY issues. ^^;;; Love would have SO blossomed between him and Zack if he didn't die. *sniff* I miss good 'ol Zack. He was inseperable from Cloud.

Otakon? AWESOMNESS!!! Someday, I REALLY wanna go to it. I think it's second biggest next to Anime Expo. Have a great time when you attend. Take piccies, cuz I wanna see your awesome cosplay. ^__^

[info]yubberducky

July 17 2006, 15:07:50 UTC 5 years ago

Reno/Rude? I love you.

[info]aziraphale_666

July 19 2006, 14:21:17 UTC 5 years ago

Reno/Rude is love. ^_^ They're just too cute together - how can you NOT support them? LoL. (And I love your icon, by the way)

I didn't realize there were so many Advent Children fans here ... maybe we should try to put together some sort of round-robin fan fiction thread, since it seems everyone's a writer, too. Would there be any interest in that?

[info]loisneach

December 1 2006, 20:19:17 UTC 5 years ago

Rather a late comment >_> *new member* But I read this and... It made me cry. Granted, it was way too late early morning, and I was listening to sad music, but this is utterly beautiful. I love it. That sense of beauty, coupled with the sense of sadness, makes it absolutely gorgeous.

*ahem* So... Yay you!

[info]aziraphale_666

December 4 2006, 00:13:32 UTC 5 years ago

Aw, it's never too late to comment! Comments are like prozac to me. XD

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. That sort of wistful melancholy was what I was going for, and I'm glad that it came across. :)

[info]loisneach

December 4 2006, 00:26:18 UTC 5 years ago

Well, it is a favourite ^^

*stamps you with WIN*

[info]reisilverfang

August 23 2007, 08:56:32 UTC 4 years ago

I'm late but...

NRRGH

That was WONDERFUL and dreadfully raw.

Win teh webbernets.

[info]aziraphale_666

August 24 2007, 08:38:42 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. ^_^ ♥
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